Our Presentation & Feedback

Regarding our presentation, we received some interesting feedbacks from different groups with this one being the most-detailed feedback and the feedback that we could look back on and use as inspiration to motivate ourselves into creating that defining opening sequence :-

(Feedback from Sarah Jeena & Tasnim Khanum)
Q: it is a lot to fit into two minutes, how will you narrow it down?
A: Well, by looking back at this, we will be able to narrow down the scenes by having brief scenes of the three paths that the main protagonist takes so it does not give away too much yet the scenes are not too brief.
Q: how are you going to book the facilities, be realistic, and think about the timing.
you may have to re-shoot certain scenes, is this possible?
A: Indeed, interesting question from the duo. We do not need to book any facilities as we had managed to ask the P.E teachers as of when the Astroturf would be empty and they had gotten back to us by saying it would be a limited period of time (in fact, around 10 minutes). We have, indeed, re-shot some of the scenes with the first scene being Nile dressing up in his sports kit being re-shot for 30 minutes. We need to make sure that we execute every aspect correctly in the procedure.
Q:  Music- how are you going to include it in the scene? Will the grime suit the smart clip? why not use it as symbolism, maybe use stereotypes?
A: We are planning to include background music in the scene but not copyrighted music - more of instrumental music that does not have rights to any copyright laws as this would not be using the voice of any artists and we would not be using copyright infringement for our Coursework. Also, we aren't really going for music that would be grimy but more of motivational music -- not Rocky Balboa-style motivational music and stuff like that but obviously music that would suit all three clips.
Q: How are you going to have so many extras in an organised way? re-think exam scene.
  Camera angles need to be thought about because there are so many different things he's doing.
A: We won't be including the exam scene in our opening sequence as we feel it would be too sudden to add a scene that could easily act as the climax of the whole movie itself; it would give too much of the plot away, to be honest, and we are trying to give a small amount of it away but not too small. Just the amount that would be expected from an opening sequence.