Wednesday, 2 November 2011

"Gloves Up" Feedback - Omar Abasi

Gloves Up (Luke Thornton, Junuz Jakupovic, Titas Taskunas and Ishaaq Nabi):
Pros:
- Great planning.
- Great presentation in the small time given.
- The name and locations have been thought out well as the name is short but snappy.
- Presentation covers almost every piece of information needed to let the reader know exactly what is happening in the opening sequence, the synopsis of the film itself etc.
Cons:
- Despite the great planning, the amount of content they are planning to add into the opening sequence may be successful or may flop.
- The last sequence in which there is a flashback to the main character being left by his parent as a child could be difficult as a fifth and sixth character that are of different ages would possibly be needed for that scene.

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